Don't you go changing for me.
(#) SyraStrange 2011-11-29 09:45:27 PM
-mouths hangs open and stays that way-
God... I do NOT see that coming. Ugh... They were just... I can't... MMMMFF! Thank you for updating, please do again soon. Or your other stories, I'd appreciate that just as much.
GASP SPENCER?! WHY?! NOOOOO! sad face ... aaanyways away from my sadness this is a great stooooory! You should like update soon because I am like in love with this story. Like legit. If I could marry this story, trust me, I would.
WOAH, that was...evil. I-I wait what. I did not see that coming. Damn only one chapter left, i'm gonna miss this story.
Oh that was good. I feel bad for Brenny, as soon as he gets back his Ryan, he is stolen away. Can't wait to read the last chapter, but I don't want it to end!
(#) PartyPoison 2011-12-02 11:26:56 PM
The last chapter was expertly done. I am shocked, but I am not surprised that I feel this way. You’ve managed once again to find an ending that is harsh, irrational and goes against everything the reader wants to happen. Yet it’s still captivating to read and the audience still wants to know what happens after this grand finale. Of course no one wanted Ryan to die, but I see now that it shows just how much control the ‘Jon’ part of Spencer’s mind has over him. You described the feelings and thoughts wonderfully. This story truly is amazing and I look forward to reading it’s inevitable end.