She’s funny looking with short black hair and a mouth that almost looks too big for her face, her features draw that fine line between attractive and repulsive, but somehow with her winged eyelin...
(#) PartyPooperX 2012-04-24 01:20:04 PMOoh Alice, lend me your gaydar? :D
nah, my gaydar's like a satnav!
Can't wait to read more! xo
Author's responseI used to have a satnav but now I don't and I'm not sure where it is, I do however have a rape alarm which is pretty cool
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-05-22 11:31:22 PM^^ Little sister using my lines. Not cool. >:(
These are the things I like. I like Alice, she's a great character. Put her in some more! I don't like Burt. But that could just be natural instict. Also I really, really like you're writing style. It is tré unique.
And the accent should probably be going the other way on that e. Testes.
Author's responseHa I don't have sisters to steal lines off so most of mine are taken from my friends without Ficwad accounts
Alice is my lesbian crush and she will be seen more, she's an important character in the story
I don't like him either! I mean in real life I love him so much but I always make him a douche canoe as a character
Thank you! And I wouldn't have known about the accent -vague hand gesture-