Frank’s eyes were wide and the only untarnished gold in the dark that had seen too much. He couldn’t turn back. He knew he should, but he was still walking.
(#) ShadowSouls 2012-07-25 02:53:05 PMGreat Chapter! Omg, I'm so excited for the next update, I NEED more Gerard though. They should just meet, fuck, then run off into the sunset together :L
Author's responseThank you :D I'm pretty excited for the next chapter too, which is probably sad, seeing as it's my own story...
Aha, but that wouldn't make much of a story, would it? xD
You shall get more Gerard soon, don't worry.
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-07-25 04:42:59 PMI cannot describe my love from robbie. He is just brilliant. Clarissa though... thinking.murderous thoughts she's such a ho bag!
I really want more Gerard, but i know you have a reason for not putting him in yet... Great chapter yet again
Author's responseI'm inclined to agree with you about Clarissa, although she's not really bad, just irritatingly narrow-minded. There shall be more Gerard really soon now, and after that, the rest of the story will have a lot of Gerard xD
I'm glad you liked the update, thanks so much for reviewing!
(#) -Ever_After- 2012-07-25 06:16:15 PMThis is where I drop down on one knee and confess my undying love for you. This story is seriously one of three reasons that I even bother to check this site, anymore, and you definitely don't disappoint. Your writing is just so fluid and alive! It's so easy to read that it's almost like breathing, and your choice of words help paint the perfect picture in my mind. You are simply amazing at capturing fear, and you turn it into this pulsing thing that I can almost feel taking route in my chest. This story could very well be published, and I fully believe that it could one day be a best seller. Your talent is a gift, and I am so thankful that you've decided to post your work for us to see. It's been so long since I've actually been able to lose myself in a story, and you just make it so easy to slip into Frank's mind and see the world you've built around him. This is simply wonderful, and I am so excited to see where you take this.
Author's responseAhhh. Why are your reviews always so lovely?! Not that I'm complaining xD I'm so pleased you feel that way about the story- and what you've said...God, it just means a whole lot to hear, thank you very, very muchly :'D
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-07-26 02:32:37 AMIs it so terrible that I ship Frank and Robbie? I don't know, man he reminds me of Billie Jo and that man is godly.
This was probably my favourite chapter yet, I really liked the pace and Frank's thoughts and Clarissa is interesting....
I think Gerard's bits are probably my favourite cause they make my mind go all Black Swan but without the lesbian sex and that's awesome. I'm just waiting for the chapter where all is explained and I can go Ohhh how didn't I see that?
Also I know I haven't reviewed in like a million years and I'm so sorry! I still love this story so much.
Author's responseIf you ship Frank and Robbie, methinks you shall like the next chapter...;D
Thank you very much, I'm so pleased you liked it and it means a lot you've taken the time to review :D :D
(#) Alexandra_Day 2012-07-26 05:52:52 AMMan please tell me that The Black Rainbow Lies are a real band! What I wouldn't give to crank up Satans Cock or I'll Fry Your Guts For Breakfast! Lovely chapter, update soon! Or and also..... fucking update TTETI or I swear to GEE! Sigh But I guess I can wait because you are AMAZING!~
(#) LanaKrueger 2012-07-26 07:34:29 AMIs it normal that I fell in love with Robbie? I guess it's not, since I always fall in love with fictional people and band dudes, but I never even like real people :D Anyways, I love this chapter and the little hints, and Gerard's parts were flawless. Have you seen the movie Suspiria? It's an Italian horror movie about a ballet school, and Gerard's parts always remind me of that movie :] I love Frank's character so much, I can relate to him in so many ways.
Author's responseHey, fictional people and dudes in bands are the best xD I'm so glad you liked the chapter, thank you! No, I haven't seen the movie...I should check it out, it sounds interesting. Thanks again for reviewing, it means a lot :D