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7. Incapable of movement
6 ReviewsEvery muscle in my short teenage body has gone on strike and refuse to function.
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Our Lips Touch
(#) xXxILoveFrankIeroxXx 2012-08-06 04:19:56 PM
oh my holy cheese what just happened? I'm currently crying. what.just.happened. :'(Author's response
oh plz don't cry it's only a story. i'll try and up date soon. -
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(#) RockMusic 2012-08-06 04:31:42 PM
Hopefully the force was Gerard ramming him out the way and not him getting hit. Because if he did I am not going blame the driver. Frank was the one stupidly standing there. You can be in a daze as you walk. Geesus Frank. I love you but you need to... -sigh- I will not get into this right now.
Amazing chapter. I loved all the things going Franks mind I just wished he could move while thinking of it... That boy.. GEESH. If there were any mistakes I didn't notice.Author's response
yeah it wasn't the Bus drivers fult. Frank could walk tho he was in shock and stuff.
thankyou for reviewing. it makes me so happy to think people really likes my story.:)
i made a mistake
i ment Frank couldn't walk (sorry).
i bet you noticed that mistake. hee hee:) -
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(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-08-06 04:35:33 PM
IT'S SO PERFECT! Okay, this is one of my top favorite stories. I'm guessing Ray picked up Frankie, or maybe even Gee. But Frank's got the luv bug baddddd. Poor him, but that's what makes this awesome!
Update~?Author's response
whoo hoo I’m one of your top fav.
umm... sorry to tell you this but no one picked up Frank.
you'll have to read the next update to find out what’s going to happen now.
speaking of updating, I’ll try to soon:) thank you for the review. -
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(#) MissFilthyDivineMCR 2012-08-06 06:39:41 PM
Sooo cute!! As everyone else is saying, what happened?!?! Dying to know!! XD Update soon! Super excited! :))) Love, Sabrina XOXO ~Stay Beautiful, Keep It Ugly~Author's response
Thank you. i'll try to update soon. and just like everyone you'll have to wait and see (or read) what happen. -
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(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-08-06 06:41:43 PM
AHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Frank must stay alive! He needs to explain things to Gerard! I loved the way you described everything in this, especially Frank's thoughts, I could picture him frozen there and hear his thoughts perfectly! I especially like the way you described the way he was gawking! XD Update soon please!!!!!! P.S. I am also currently showering you with skittles and an alive and well Frank Iero! Maybe next you can have Gee and gummy bears? ;)Author's response
Thank you!
hehehe i had a giggle to myself as i wrote the describing of Frank gawking.
WHOOP WHOOP, happy dance. Yay love you!
'I'm singing in the skittles'
While danceing with Frank Iero!
(Best Day EVER!!!)
oh yum Gee and Gummy bears, i so can't wait for that:). -
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(#) GotSparkle 2012-08-07 07:55:01 AM
I'll be borrowing that santa out of the easter bunnies arse bit, if you don't mind :)Author's response
yeah that's cool, i don't mind, i'm just glad you like it that much that you want to use it. let me know what story you use it in so i can read it:)