Then he smiles at me; shakily, nervously, sweetly, and it’s the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen.
- Gah! You don't know how excited i got when i got a notification for an update! I love this story SO much. I love when gerard isn't being an arse to frank and is being alive xD frank is being so nervous its adorable! Mikey, i just fucking love mikey. He is so awesome with frank and gerard :) lovely update and i can't wait for more xD
Author's responseAwwh, that's so sweet, thank you! :'D I have to admit, it was kinda daunting writing this chapter, as I've never really written about non-drunk/ non-arrogant Gerard before, so I was a little nervous about posting. Thank you very much for reviewing!
(#) JessicaAlexandra 2012-08-22 05:48:05 PMHi there. Oh my gosh when I saw you updated I squeeled and all the people on my train looked at my weird. But I don't care. You are amazing at writing and pull out feelings for this story I didn't know I had. I cried almost all the way through this chapter, it is by far the best one yet. When Gerard spoke to him so sweetly I wanted to die. It made me so happy to see him treat Frank with such care. The entire time they were alone I wanted them to hug, kiss, hold hands or pretty much anything. I wanted them to aknowledge the physical connection they had the night before. Gahhhh please update. I don't think I could wait another month.
Author's responseEeerp, really? Thank you SO much! I was really nervous about this one, 'cause it was very different to write, so I'm so pleased you liked it, it really means a lot- and even more so that you took the time to review :'D And as for the physical connection...well, I shall update soon ;D
(#) Bella_Jinxx 2012-08-23 03:10:03 AMThis is so incredibly beautiful. Seriously, I admire your writing so much, you wouldn't believe it. You're one of my biggest writing idols- your work is glued together with such beautiful, intricate words, words that you don't usually find. They're stunning and beautiful. Never, EVER, stop writing, Lucy. Please.
Author's responseThank you so much, you have no idea how much that means to me to hear. I came home from school to this review, and it cheered me up so much. Thank you- just thank you.
(#) LanaKrueger 2012-08-23 08:27:47 AMYou never fail to amaze me. Such a beautiful chapter, full of emotions and characters that seem so real and alive.. After reading it, I was kinda disappointed to find myself sitting in my room and not in the Iero/Way house ._. I don't know how you do this, but every chapter is so heartbreaking yet beautiful, they make me want to cry and smile at the same time. Thank you for writing and sharing your amazing talent with us and thank you for these minutes of escape
- how did you become this good? Your writing is beautiful and I think it's this kind of fanfiction MCR would approve of because it's creative and ... It's art. I can't even it's so good and thank you once again for sharing your talent with us
(#) MySuicideInSilence 2012-08-24 01:11:37 PMYou have no reason to worry about the change,it was really well written and you seriously just know what to write and where.
You are amazing.
I'm really looking forward to the nezt chapter.
Kinda anxious to know what will happen next.
(#) LlamasInPieces 2012-08-25 01:40:17 AMAh,I had a huge grin on my face when I saw this new chapter!
This is one of the best stories I've ever read,and I'm being serious.
You're amazing at writing,I wish I was as talented as you.
I love this story so much,and I can't wait for the next chapter:)
(#) mychemicalpony 2012-08-25 11:42:43 AMAsdfghjkl your stories leave me speechless, and this one is no different. I'm one to criticise people who use lots of similes and metaphores (mainly because I'm sick of my English teacher going on about them) but you just are like mind blowingly good at using them to an effect that (in my opinion) doesn't look over the top. It's just perfect. Like, if perfection was written down in a story, this story would be it.