Then he smiles at me; shakily, nervously, sweetly, and it’s the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen.
(#) Meganisariot 2012-08-26 03:36:53 PMThis is the most amazing story! It's so beautifully written and emotional. I like how it's all starting to happen between gerard and frank now but I like how there's all this unknown surrounding gerard and why he's so broken and emotional. Lovelovelovelove this. I fangirl every time I see an update :')
(#) CypherDetonation 2012-08-26 04:37:22 PMoh my god i don't even know what my emotions are doing anymore but this chapter is so beautiful and just oh my fucking god how the hell do you write like that. seriously, i'd be happy with having half as much talent as you. even a quarter of your talent would be amazing. seriously, this is the most amazing thing i've ever read. this chapter was so beautiful, and i was like, grinning like some crazy fuck when frank and gerard were arguing over which band was better and just dkjshfkjdbhshibggvi you are literally the most perfect human being in existence god bless i hope you find twenty dollars on the ground.
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-08-29 07:08:29 PM
Gerard jumps and hides even further away behind his mass of dark hair, biting furiously at his nails as he turns to look up at his younger brother’s entrance, and I’m left to wonder just exactly what I would have done; how far I would have gone to reassure this shattered, shadowed being who has an inexplicable hold over me.
SERIOUSLY! Mikey came in at the wrong time XD Once again a great chapter!
- This is fucking awesome! Like to amazing you've made me feel emotions I didn't even know I had! Oh my god did they almost kiss in the graveyard? Haven't stopped reading this in 3 days it's so good. I've crowd laughed been angry sympathetic they list goes on your so talented please don't wait to long to update?
- Just oh my god you know! It is impossible to make you know how good a writer you are! I was embarrassed to write this review because I thought that while obviously you would like feedback you wouldn't really care what I had to say. I mean after what I have just read there is nothing critical I can say and I didnt just want to fan girl all over you! But I will say this is beautiful and is the best frerard I have ever read! One thing I cannot stress enough is how throughly descriptive and how well you have used your words in this! I have taken my time with this because I didnt want to waste a second of detail! Thank you again for writing and I hope I haven't embarrassed myself or made you uncomfortable with my declaration of love for your story! But seriously wow ... There's nothing else to say