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We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

by DansBitch 4 Reviews

We are sick and we are tired We're all fools and worthless liars Young and unemployable Lonely, drunk and beautiful We're so sick and oh so tired, so tired ..

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2012/10/11 - Updated: 2012/10/11 - 1053 words

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  • We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

    (#) LaurentheHuman 2012-10-11 11:54:18 AM

    First fics FTW! :D
    I know nothing about critique so feel free to ignore this, but: I like where you're going with this, however I feel like it moved a bit too fast and it left me confused. Will we get a little backstory to Frank dating Ron later and maybe his sorta crush on Gee?
    Anyway, keep writing! I have faith in ya. I'm definitely looking forward to reading the rest. :3

    Author's response

    Thank you for your honesty :3
    And to answer your question, yes there use will be filled ank and Rin on Ron, thats comming in a later chapter i promise. I know it seems rushed, but i didn't know how to start it. But it will get better, i just need to find my ground (if thats the way you'd out it? :L)

    dear lord that was an epic fail :L

    Yes use will be fill in on Frank and Ron**

    fuck it anyway grrrrrr!!! Filled**
  • We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

    (#) RoseFrankiie 2012-10-11 12:27:12 PM

    Yay! I love this :D

    Author's response

    thank you Rosie :3
  • We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

    (#) DanFrancisco 2012-10-11 12:43:43 PM

    This is awesome, babyguuuuurl!!! Update soon? :D

    Author's response

    Fanks baby :3 Updated :P
  • We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

    (#) Mirazal 2012-10-11 02:22:31 PM

    Oooh a gay OMC! Risky. I like it, because the bandim is full if Frerard and slash and stuff. Ahhh. Refreshing.
    So I agree with Lauren, some of this wasn't explained and I didn't understand it that well... I kinda like where it can go though.
    Possibilities! Update soon please!

    Author's response

    sorrry, but this might or might not END UP being a freard :/ Hope you still read thought :3

    I apologise over and over for the confusion. I didn't realise it at the time. Hopefully the next chapter doesn't confuse you so much, please tell me if it does

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