We are sick and we are tired We're all fools and worthless liars Young and unemployable Lonely, drunk and beautiful We're so sick and oh so tired, so tired ..
(#) LaurentheHuman 2012-10-11 11:54:18 AMFirst fics FTW! :D
I know nothing about critique so feel free to ignore this, but: I like where you're going with this, however I feel like it moved a bit too fast and it left me confused. Will we get a little backstory to Frank dating Ron later and maybe his sorta crush on Gee?
Anyway, keep writing! I have faith in ya. I'm definitely looking forward to reading the rest. :3
Author's responseThank you for your honesty :3
And to answer your question, yes there use will be filled ank and Rin on Ron, thats comming in a later chapter i promise. I know it seems rushed, but i didn't know how to start it. But it will get better, i just need to find my ground (if thats the way you'd out it? :L)
dear lord that was an epic fail :L
Yes use will be fill in on Frank and Ron**
fuck it anyway grrrrrr!!! Filled**
- Oooh a gay OMC! Risky. I like it, because the bandim is full if Frerard and slash and stuff. Ahhh. Refreshing.
So I agree with Lauren, some of this wasn't explained and I didn't understand it that well... I kinda like where it can go though.
Possibilities! Update soon please!
Author's responsesorrry, but this might or might not END UP being a freard :/ Hope you still read thought :3
I apologise over and over for the confusion. I didn't realise it at the time. Hopefully the next chapter doesn't confuse you so much, please tell me if it does