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• We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

  (#) LaurentheHuman 2012-10-11

  First fics FTW! :D
  I know nothing about critique so feel free to ignore this, but: I like where you're going with this, however I feel like it moved a bit too fast and it left me confused. Will we get a little backstory to Frank dating Ron later and maybe his sorta crush on Gee?
  Anyway, keep writing! I have faith in ya. I'm definitely looking forward to reading the rest. :3

  Author's response

  Thank you for your honesty :3
  And to answer your question, yes there use will be filled ank and Rin on Ron, thats comming in a later chapter i promise. I know it seems rushed, but i didn't know how to start it. But it will get better, i just need to find my ground (if thats the way you'd out it? :L)
  
  dear lord that was an epic fail :L
  
  Yes use will be fill in on Frank and Ron**
  
  fuck it anyway grrrrrr!!! Filled**

• We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

  (#) RoseFrankiie 2012-10-11

  Yay! I love this :D

  Author's response

  thank you Rosie :3

• We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

  (#) DanFrancisco 2012-10-11

  This is awesome, babyguuuuurl!!! Update soon? :D

  Author's response

  Fanks baby :3 Updated :P

• We're all Fools and Worthless Liars

  (#) Mirazal 2012-10-11

  Oooh a gay OMC! Risky. I like it, because the bandim is full if Frerard and slash and stuff. Ahhh. Refreshing.
  So I agree with Lauren, some of this wasn't explained and I didn't understand it that well... I kinda like where it can go though.
  Possibilities! Update soon please!

  Author's response

  sorrry, but this might or might not END UP being a freard :/ Hope you still read thought :3
  
  I apologise over and over for the confusion. I didn't realise it at the time. Hopefully the next chapter doesn't confuse you so much, please tell me if it does

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