This is quite excellent.
It's written very well.
Heyyy is that from a Panic song?
Author's responseomg thank you it took me like a week to figure out the plot and then another three days to make a draft and then Q43UPY;;HR;G
also yes i currently forget which one
(#) MCRkilljoy 2012-10-12I don't quite understand why, but for some reason this has intrigued me..... Not many stories do that. It would usually take me a chapter or two to get into one, but this is different. I like it. Very well written.
Author's responseThank you omfg my friends found it boring but now I have hope and spaheSJHTWE38 thank you
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-10-17Oh my God. I think I just found a piece of writing on this site by someone with an appreciation for sentence-structure. Praise be to Jesus.
Intriguing start, love that last line too. Onwards!
Author's responseI try my best to be an English professor with writing, which I can now see that I'm doing fairly well at; thank you.
I want to make this up to 40 chapters, and so the story shall continue. \o/
Btw the first and last lines are from a Panic! At The Disco song, though I forget which one at the current moment.
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-11-15I'm going to take a wild guess and say your a Panic! At The Disco fan because of the "I believe this may call for a proper introduction" and the "Well, don’t you see? I’m the narrator and this is just the prologue." part... I loke this stroy so far, CONINUE!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO ADD THIS TO MY ADERTS! THERE! DONE! ADDED TO ADLERTS! NOW WRITE
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