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The Lemon Games
Trapped in a Video Game, Naruto must get it on to level up. I do not own Naruto or any other things mixed in this story and I do not make any profit from writing this story.
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The Lemon Games
(#) wolverine9 2013-07-16
Don't really know what else to say other than holy hell is this a hot story. Normally I start seeing red at such an absurdley powered up Naruto but the fact that this seems to be a parody cancles all that out. One of the hottest stories out there and I hope to see an update soon.Author's response
It is a parady, it truly is, but I try to throw in a few serious points to make it all the more enjoyableThe Lemon Games
(#) daleknumber1 2013-07-31
I'm a fan of this fic and look forward to seeing how it progresses. I give it a Jiraiya two thumbs up and perverted grin.
I'm curious about the reasoning behind some of his choices for perks and would like to see the results of this in-story. For example, choosing Golem of War means he's essentially traded the ability not to get stabbed for being able to quickly repair his weapons in the field. I'd also like to see him using and developing his existing abilities like chakra chains (either for combat or sex) a bit more as it seems at the moment he's charging towards ultimate abilities like Demon Form Divine Form True Moukton True Eternal Magenkyo Sharingan which, while awesome, feel like they should be more part of the Shippuden era. It will be interesting to see how you approach this given he's already reached the level caps for so many critical skills. I guess either an update of the book or something like Demon Form Divine Form Sage Mode / Kyuubi Mode unlocking epic-level advancement?
If you're going for the Loli-Gagging Medal joke, Moegi would seem to be the obvious choice, but hopefully post-timeskip if you choose to go there? I like that you've used very minor characters like Kagero and the rest of the Fuma clan and hope they won't be one-shots.
It's also nice that you haven't jumped straight into him having sex with Hinata, Ino and Sakura and are working on story development there - presumably they still feel the effects of his sexual aura, but are resisting for now?Author's response
Hmm.. Thanks for the two thumbs up.
I'm still trying to tweak everything. Unfortunately, the game is constantly evolving as I think of more things to throw into it and it makes it hard to plan things out. I do have a few ideas but again there is always some things that will change.
They won't be one-shots, I do intend for Naruto to eventually be with every girl he's already been with at least twice, maybe three times.
Hinata, Ino, and maybe, likely, possibly, probably Sakura will be post-timeskip. I haven't decided fully on Sakura, it's one of those wait and see type of things, even for me.The Lemon Games
(#) 4rm36uy 2013-08-02
Have you thought about showing Naruto having sex regularly with his women by way of fade outs or the like as it seems right now they only seem to have sex when you write the scenes for it. You could have him getting out of a bed and turning to look at one of the women and remembering about the night before and not have to do an entire chapter about the event.
Love the chapters with the sex scenes.Author's response
I would do this, truly I would, but Naruto is already overpowered as he is and we're not even to the time-skip yet. Was this done on purpose? A little but even still. Because I would have to count those girls towards the game, I can't do this.The Lemon Games
(#) qwertyuiopas 2013-08-08
This is an amazing story, great work, and I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the great work!!!The Lemon Games
(#) wolverine9 2013-09-04
Can I say how much I've come to appreciate this story? I've been a fan of this for a while even when it was back on FF.net (still remember the unpleasant surprise of finding this gone and not knowing where to find it.)
However since then I've discovered something. Other stories with harem plots take their stories and inject them with unhealthy amounts of melodrama, trying (and for the most part failing horribly) at writing real relationships among multiple women like they have a goddamn clue what they're talking about.
Here however? Naruto gets achievements and XP for fucking every which way he can concieve of (or rather you can). With this you've actually allowed some fucking fun in this genre. For that I am grateful, along with the fact that the lemon scenes are really damn hot.Author's response
Can I saw how much I've come to appreciate the fans that have enjoyed this story since it was on FF.net?
I try to write this story the way I originally intended it to. I wanted to take the concept of stories with wonderful lemony goodness and add in the aspect of it having a Video Game feel to it in a small way at least. I had never seen a video game story that had lemons in it, nonetheless one that was solely lemons.
But as I've progressed through the story, I wanted to add fight scenes so people could get a feel for how far Naruto has come. I try to make them realistic and not have Naruto one-side everyone, but it might very well happen. I don't know how the story will eventually progress.
I add melodrama to my story. Just look at Chapter 17. Tsunade gets upset in an understandable way, Naruto helps her through it and they bang. I don't see the point of dragging the melodrama on and on in a story that's porn with very little plot.
I would like to say thank you for finding my Lemon scenes nice and hot. I have found that I've been disappointed with the feel of other lemon stories because they don't give quite a bit of depth to the lemon scenes. Five paragraphs and they're done. I wanted to give them a little more depth, say what each partner felt and was doing. Now I can't write too much on the character's thrusting because let's face it, they're ain't a whole lot you can write about that. but saying if the character is nibbling somewhere, grabbing something, that's stuff that makes a Lemon Scene hot in my opinion.The Lemon Games
(#) Masterofbalance 2013-09-20
It took way to long too find this story again after it left your fanfiction only too find you done more chapters, that's insane!The Lemon Games
(#) kayG 2013-10-19
Its always exciting to see this being updated(even though it takes a while, its always worth the wait), I'm a bit worried though that by the time Shippuden rolls around in the fic he'll be beyond god-like, unless of course you find a way to makes things challenging or assigning less points as he gets higher(like the pokemon games), though I don't really care about it that much since I'm enjoying the story. The amount of planning, drafts and other paraphernalia must be huge, so I really I appreciate you sharing with the rest of us.
Ja neh!The Lemon Games
(#) aznxa21 2013-11-20
Well I have to say overall this is a very enjoyable story. The lemon scenes are great. Although it would be nice if you included more interaction between characters, along with action scenes. But meh can't really complain on that part since this is basically a porn story, a good one at that.
I look forward to seeing more of this story good luck on writing it.
Also lol by the time of the fourth shinobi war arc Naruto will be god pretty much.The Lemon Games
(#) brody818 2013-12-22
This is my favorite story hands down on any site. However, I've been waiting forever for chapter 24 to come up. When will that happen?
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