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Target Hinata
During his training trip, Naruto is given a scroll which holds the secrets in how to seduce and ensnare women. A scroll he uses at first on the women and kunoichi around him but soon on the Shinob...
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Eroninja
(#) Fanficreader71 2013-01-30
Great chapter, I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.Eroninja
(#) DeathTitan 2013-03-28
A particularly interesting tale in 'acquiring' Hinata, I'm honestly surprised that you're one of the very few who have used the -pretend to be her teammate- route to get Naruto close to her. I really like that you hadn't forgotten Ino either, and even included her in the beginning which was a "bonus" in my opinion.
Also, I found the mirror scene to be quite interesting as well. The idea could definitely be played for various other females in the series and I certainly hope you keep that in mind for future scenes.
Very refreshing to see the planning part starting to build early instead of later. Could use a bit more detail when the characters interact to make them feel more human, but that's more of a nit pick of mine.
Diligently reading and reviewing, Titan.Eroninja
(#) Arashi_Uzukaze 2013-04-04
Not sure on how to contact you, but there is a problem with the Ino and Hinata chapters.
It seems that there are 2 Chapter Ones, Ino and Hinata. I think it's glitch that you should try and fix.
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