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Target Hinata
During his training trip, Naruto is given a scroll which holds the secrets in how to seduce and ensnare women. A scroll he uses at first on the women and kunoichi around him but soon on the Shinob...
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Eroninja
(#) Dylemin 2017-09-10
Chapter 2 has the same minor problem chapter 1 had...It spends most of its time setting up the story to follow rather than the story at present. I however view this as a good problem in that this set up is necessary for the long run. The scene with Ino at the beginning foreshadows targets we can expect latter on and the scenes with Hinata demonstrates that this story isn't going to just throw the women into Naruto's lap without regard to their character. The scenes also show how much more mature Naruto has already become in his planning. The snippets of information we get in regards to the Kyuubi, foreshadows an inevitable confrontation as well as explains that this jutsu may be responsible for the feelings Kyuubi is getting. Overall great characterizations and well done foreshadowing. 10/10Eroninja
(#) Dylemin 2017-10-29
Following through with my re-reviews, I found Naruto seemingly more intelligent than his OT counterpart. The scene with Ino explaining obvious things to Naruto did do a lot to quell the fear that Naruto was just better out of nowhere and he is in fact simply growing as any good character should. The seduction of Hinata was well set up and made sense for the characters with Naruto having a brilliant plan but forgetting one important detail. The Kyuubi scenes are wonderful as the incredibly sparse information reflects exactly what Kyuubi knows at this point which is to say not much. Ino's predominate role in this chapter also sets a good precedent for chapters to include already seduced characters and not just focus on the target like a string of disconnected lemons with an similar hook but rather an intricate and growing story. Absolute perfection.Eroninja
(#) Daniel2610994 2017-11-13
Oh man and this is how it all began, the best decision ino could ever do was to accept narutos mission and it all went from there, thanks to her hinata finally got what she wanted too even if she still has confidence issues...for now, and how kurama or kiyomi experienced pleasure for the very furst time thanks to naruto and the beginning of their relationship :3 damn this story made me love the kurama/naruto pairing haha.Eroninja
(#) milessmith1111 2022-07-06
Another great chapter. I like how Naruto approach Hinata to get her. I am also interested in how the Jutsu is affecting Kurama. Makes you wonder how this Jutsu really works. I can't wait to read the rest.
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