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Untitled Revenge

Who is the first person you would turn to when you are about to make a decision that would change your life forever? RoyxRiza mild spoilers after episode 25

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters: Riza Hawkeye, Roy Mustang - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/08/07 - Updated: 2006/08/07 - 1993 words - Complete

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• Untitled Revenge

  (#) Misk 2006-08-26 03:50:09 PM

  I enjoy that you used so much of the surrounding mood to express the feelings of the characters. Naturally you described how they were feeling too, but there's a real art in letting the averting of the head or the flicker of an eye show what the feelings are.
  
  I think this was a good mix of atmosphere and description. And you captured the character of both of these people very accurately.

• Untitled Revenge

  (#) timberwolf17 2007-01-10 08:43:34 PM

  Sweetly put, This fanfic is

• Untitled Revenge

  (#) Iron Maiden fan 2007-03-12 10:11:36 PM

  That story was GREAT! but no offence but I don't think it was really RoyxRiza but still, it was good ^_^

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