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• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) Cateagle 2014-01-14

  That last line is definitely a bit ominous and now I'm most eagerly awaiting the next chapter. It's definitely a fun story and I'm really enjoying it.
  
  This chapter definitely showed the downside of the situation between Neville and Tracey and I'm sure more will show up.

  Author's response

  Thank you for commenting!
  As for Nev and Trace Yeah, pregnancy is hard on the body and uncomfortable and I wanted to show that.

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) Gruffard 2014-01-14

  Something seems up with Astoria. I feel that is important. The setup for something bad will happen doom and gloom feeling was done well.
  
  Although overall the chapter did seem a little rushed. Hopefully we see the fallout of this chapter soon.
  
  Thanks for the interesting read. Looking forward to more.

  Author's response

  Thank you for commenting!
  I'm sorry it felt rushed to you. It seemed to take forever to write from my perspective. I hope you like the next chapter.

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) PhDMatt 2014-01-14

  Thanks for coming back to this story. Really well done, though the title of the chapter made me think I'd missed something between HP and DG at first....Looking forward to future installments.

  Author's response

  Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) firelord 2014-01-16

  thank you for sharing please continue to update as life allows

  Author's response

  I will! Thank you for commenting!

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) paladin_nox 2014-01-16

  Great Great chapter and i look forward to you next update. Thanks for sharing

  Author's response

  Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) lordamnesia 2014-02-14

  This story is a lot better then I was expecting (especially with 'Bond' in the name), thanks for your great work! Keep up the good job!

  Author's response

  Thank you! I'm glad I exceeded your expectations and I'll try to continue doing so.

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) PhDMatt 2014-09-22

  I missed this plot hole (or at least perceived plot hole) on the first reading, but I realized that there may be an issue in that as Astoria is a huge Malfoy fan at this point, she might not be willing to swear not to do any harm to the Potter or Black families. This may or may not be something you'll want to address along the way. Still a great story and read. thanks for your hard work on it.

  Author's response

  Hmmm, interesting idea. Normally I'd say that since she got the portkey from her folks who did swear that she wouldn't have any trouble. However I suppose if I wanted something to occur I could say that magic recognized that it was her who used it and/or that her father's oath covered her as a minor. I thank you for the idea whether I use it or not. As Artie Johnson used to say, "Verrry Interesting!"

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