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A Different Sort of Bond
(#) doubledamn 2014-08-23
Good chapter, though I think you need to reread your chapter 22. Hecate said they had to stay within a meter of each other at all times.
No biggie, great work. Keep it up.Author's response
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If I did put in the one meter comment I'll have to go change that. It doesn't quite fit with the current outline of where the story goes from here.
Thank you for pointing out the one meter thing. I'll go fix that now.A Different Sort of Bond
(#) Cateagle 2014-08-23
snicker I'm sure they'll continue to enjoy that closeness and I love how their feelings for each other are developing nicely. I daresay that they will continue their development into quite the powerhouse and woe be unto their enemies (who had better hope that a higher power has mercy on them because I can't see Daphne and Harry having any whatsoever).Author's response
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I'm glad you are still enjoying the story.A Different Sort of Bond
(#) firelord 2014-08-24
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put in to this story please continue to update as life allows also the only problem I saw was the end where you had her rushing of without harryAuthor's response
You may rest assure that Harry followed close behind or she would have bounced at the doorway. :)
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