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A day at the mall

One day at the galleria mall the gang were doing there usual stuff . Nickii was slacking as usual and Jonesy was finding a new job as everyday he gets fired . Caitlin was at the lemon . Wyatt was d...

Category: 6teen - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2006/09/09 - Updated: 2006/09/09 - 316 words - Complete

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• A day at the mall

  (#) jekka10 2006-09-09 01:48:16 PM

  If you go to fanfiction dot com then theres over 100 6teen stories.

• A day at the mall

  (#) Riane46 2006-10-09 05:20:06 PM

  Hi, good start, but can you please put spaces, and paragraphes. And... ex:
  
  1: Hi, dude
  
  2: Hi, dudette!
  
  It's just an example

• A day at the mall

  (#) country_girl 2008-11-24 09:16:15 AM

  I know that this story is a little old but you have to put in spaces so that we can read it and understand it better!
  
  Its a good story, but all you have to do it make sure that not only make it have a little sense to it but also to have a little bit of coma's and periods!

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