- I read your A/N in the beginning, where you talked about having second row seats (ahem, lucky you!Aha.) and I thought, "Wow, this is interesting...I'll have a go." And as I read it, I realized you have an incredible ability to really BE the character. I especially love how you portray both Ryan and Brendon. (In their cute lil relationship of course, lol.)
There were a few moments in this fanfic, though, where I kinda got confused...there's still one part where I got confused:
"I..." He bit his lip. "I'm sorry."
"For what?" I asked.
"For not noticing."
Was it the fact that Brendon just wasn't noticing Ryan as much as Ryan was noticing him?
Otherwise, that was a great job. =) Well done. I'll be reading your other fanfics!
PS Sorry if this was a huge review, lol!
(#) indie_chicky 2007-01-18"But the one thing that hadn't changed was the smile that was plastered across his face. He looked too cute, as always."
I LOVE this story!!! There was so much cuteness, but I love how you portrayed their shyness and intimacy. It was perfect. Great job!
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