Categories > Cartoons > Class of the Titans > Treason and love Forest
chapter 1
13 reviewsArchie and Atlanta are lost in a forest and tried to do the possible thing to leave. AXA
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Treason and love Forest
(#) greektitan 2006-09-26
try translating it in english..please?Author's response
i finish
i do it in englishTreason and love Forest
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-09-26
Je ne parlent pas le français et fassent vous écrivez l'anglaisAuthor's response
bonjour, ca va?
je m´appelle Ana, j'ai 12 ans
sorry but i am lerning frncais i will need more time for to do stories in french
Treason and love Forest
(#) mandie2484 2006-09-26
I'm pretty sure this is Spanish, not French. I don't think that there is any rule against posting a story in another lanugage, but I could be wrong.Author's response
hi
sorry for the spanish
i finish the story in english!!!Treason and love Forest
(#) RainPaw 2006-09-26
Hi, I wasn't sure why it sounded funny, then i found out it was in spanish frist and was tanlated into Engish, and i read it again and it's really good! Can't wait to see more stories by you.Author's response
hi,
thanks, i will try to do another in this week if i can..
sorry if a maked some mistakes because i talk spanish.
i know english but is not like a prefecional, and i am lerning francais lol :)Treason and love Forest
(#) TwoStripedSocks 2006-09-26
Well... I guess english isn't your first language, huh? So good job. (=Author's response
hi,
thanks.
yes,english isn't my first language. sorry, if i maked some mistakes :(
i will make more in english, if i don't get alot of homework. lol =)Treason and love Forest
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-09-27
How long have you been learning english for? seeing as it is not your first language it was very good. can't wait for the next chapter.Author's response
hi
i will try to do another chapter if i don´t get alot of homework.
and i have six years learning english and this is my first with francais.
lolTreason and love Forest
(#) greektitan 2006-09-28
it was good but 3 things
1.Alot of spelling grammer and sorta doesnt make scence when they talk.
2.Need paragraphs.
3.Short and use quotation marks instead of - example "Hey archie"Atlanta said."Hi atlanta"Archie replied kindly.
Not to be mean..just some advice you knowAuthor's response
hi
sorry..
i am from mexico, i really don't know how to do a perfect story like the others.
thanks for the adviceTreason and love Forest
(#) dancechickie222 2006-09-28
hey yeah i agree, it does need a little bit of spelling/grammar corrections but the story is pretty good! i read it and i hope you update soon, it's good.Author's response
hi
thanks..
sorry for the spelling errors.
is because i am mexican, lol.. bye!
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