The Last Battle has been fought, and Harry Potter has won. The price, however, has been high. Nearly every person Harry cared for is dead, maimed, or otherwise injured. The magical culture of Bri...
(#) MasterKtulu 2006-10-18 05:08:54 PM
Wonderful story, and thank you for a happy ending that brought a smile to my face.
(#) Total_Blue 2006-11-20 06:05:27 PM
Excellent story. I had a great time reading it. I was sad to see Luna die. I liked how you showed that Harry never forgot her, but buying the Quibbler when her father could no longer run it.
I liked the scene with the DE's appearing on the airplace wing. I KNEW that was going to happen. Great homage to "Make a Wish" there. Looking forward to reading your other "Harry goes back in time" story.
(#) DA Jones 2007-01-06 07:53:30 PM
This is an awesome story. I read through tthe whole story everyword, even thugh it took me all day.
All in all, an excellent story. Well thought out and executed. I enjoyed it very much, but... you could do with an editor. You have many repetitive spelling errors.
(#) Carla 2007-02-21 12:47:37 AM
I really enjoy your stories, and how you incorporate history and political theories. It makes them feel more 'grown up'. Keep'em comin'! :)
(#) Rubel 2007-03-09 07:47:07 PM
Cool Story. Keep up the great work.
(#) Rini 2007-03-30 02:33:12 PM
Wow, the ending was really chilling for some reason. I enjoyed this story immensely. I love your take on their characterization.
(#) papamidnite 2007-04-01 09:24:57 PM
great story, you did 3 back in time stories and I actually liked all of them
(#) Chibeh 2007-05-24 07:54:19 AM
Yay good ending!
Your story has been great, but I think the ending was a bit bland and boring.
I am extremely happy though, since this is the first Harry-goes-back-in-time-to-change-the-future story that I've read that is complete.