The Last Battle has been fought, and Harry Potter has won. The price, however, has been high. Nearly every person Harry cared for is dead, maimed, or otherwise injured. The magical culture of Bri...
All in all, an excellent story. Well thought out and executed. I enjoyed it very much, but... you could do with an editor. You have many repetitive spelling errors.
(#) Rubel 2007-03-09
Cool Story. Keep up the great work.
(#) Rini 2007-03-30
Wow, the ending was really chilling for some reason. I enjoyed this story immensely. I love your take on their characterization.
great story, you did 3 back in time stories and I actually liked all of them
Your story has been great, but I think the ending was a bit bland and boring.
I am extremely happy though, since this is the first Harry-goes-back-in-time-to-change-the-future story that I've read that is complete.
I would have to say that was my favorite "Harry goes back in time" story - and I have read dozens!
Lovely work. You have a smooth, eminently readable writing style, with crisp, believable dialogue, individualized characters, excellent action scenes and true emotion.
I am impressed, and have added your name to the small, select group of fanfic writers I recommend to others.
This is one of my favorite "Harry goes back in time to change things" story. I enjoyed have a Harry that told Dumbledore to back off and that he wouldn't be manipulated this time. Very cool. The whole story was interesting and I was glad to see a happy ending. Thanks you for a great read.
As good as any redo fic I've read. Thanks for a fun read!
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