Categories > Original > Fantasy > Kingdom of the Elements

Chapter1: Earth, Air, Fire, Water

by Reko 3 Reviews

James, Cassandra, Dameon, and Arya are meeting in the forest,talking about the strange things that had been happening to them... hope you like it, pleas eread and reveiw thank you !!!!! sorry its...

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/10/12 - Updated: 2006/10/13 - 938 words


  • Kingdom of the Elements

    (#) MrTortue 2006-10-13 01:47:02 PM

    Well after reading chapter one...i have to say the story went along too fast and you should really slow down the story and explain how they got the powers and not make it just happen...

    Author's response

    kk ill try to, i was very excited about it
    ill explain more in the next chapter
  • Kingdom of the Elements

    (#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14 02:35:45 PM

    Hey, thanks for the review! I love your story.

    Author's response

    Thanx, yours is realy good, looking forward to more.
    I'll let you know when I've updated, I'm waiting for an insperation. I'm going to say more about the characters.

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