James, Cassandra, Dameon, and Arya are meeting in the forest,talking about the strange things that had been happening to them...
hope you like it, pleas eread and reveiw thank you !!!!!
(#) MrTortue 2006-10-13 01:47:02 PM
Well after reading chapter one...i have to say the story went along too fast and you should really slow down the story and explain how they got the powers and not make it just happen...
kk ill try to, i was very excited about it
ill explain more in the next chapter
(#) Traviss 2006-10-13 01:56:30 PM
It was a good story line and for a short story , it was interesting , i found a few spelling mistakes but other wise it was very good. good job.
Thanx Traviss, I'll talk to you on Monday. :)
(#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14 02:35:45 PM
Hey, thanks for the review! I love your story.
Thanx, yours is realy good, looking forward to more.
I'll let you know when I've updated, I'm waiting for an insperation. I'm going to say more about the characters.