(#) youngandreckless 2006-10-15first chapter written very well. makes me wanna read more! onto the next chapter. xoxo -- Laura
Author's responsethanks. i spent a lot of time on it and i meant to make it not so cliche, but i think it ended up in that category anyway. i think it's okay to be predictable sometimes
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-10-17That´s a really neat opening chapter you wrote. I love it, especially the caustic remark about the nutritionist.
On a further note, don´t worry too much about predictability. In the end that´s part of what allows us to categorize the stories on here (and the rest of the world, for that matter.) Humans can´t do without stereotyping. ;)
Author's responsethis review makes my mind swoon. thank you for making me feel okay with that chapter. it means a lot to me.
oh, and i'm currently reading yours. don't worry, i'll return the favor ;)
- Oh mi wobbles!!
I love it and you better keep posting, becasue if you don't I will take this computer mouse and...no I'm just kidding.
But seriously, I am in love with this.
Oh Btw- got the next chapter up on my fic!! reveals something about Jen nobody knows...Fun.
Author's response"Oh mi wobbles!!"? i'm hoping that doesn't mean "eat my shit" in some secret language.
seriously, thanks for reviewing. your love is equally noted.
and i know you've updated. i already read it. how's that for sneaky?
(#) isuckatlifen 2006-12-17great start im not gonna leave a long review cause i wanna go read more wait i just waisted my time writing that and that crap im gonna go ill review later
Author's responsei'm in love with new readers. thanks for the r&r
(#) xharlequingirl 2007-04-27So, I just started reading this story. I love it so far. I can't wait to read on. You're amazing.
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