Jou wants Mai, Yugi wants Yami, but Yami and Mai seem to want each other. A very twisted fic of longing, jealousy, and death! one-shot
(#) YamiRoojii 2006-11-26 03:31:59 PMSorry.
I like the fact that it isn't a typical 'happy ending' romance. The characters are OOC but it's still kinda believable.
There are a few spelling mistakes but the story is so good that you don't really notice them.
-turns to PARCD and starts to laugh-
I'd like to see you force Raven to do ANYTHING you pathetic piece of bellybutton lint.
Author's responseo.O....bellybutton lint? -laughs histerically- Roojii, only you would say something like that... Damn girl I love it when you insult people!
(#) Sandra-Dark 2006-11-27 01:58:50 AM((O.O)) wow what an ending! would have never though Joey to shoot himself...loved it gal and u know it! ^-^
Author's responseIt's OOC, but at the same time it's not because when people are in love they act different....MUWAHAHAHA!!! -glomps Brandon- MINE! >.>....sry about that... And yeah, I was pretty proud of myself for this fic! ^_^! Ty for finally reviewing :P you know you're awesome lol
(#) BlackEgyptianKitten 2006-12-02 09:30:42 AMGreat Fic Raven. I liked the whole fic completely. The ending was different, and I liked that. ^^
I have to say this about PARCD though, he/she can't make us change the way we write. If he/she has a problem about it, they can go suck a lemon.
Great job again Raven. Your a master at this. ^___^
Author's responseThanks Kitten! You're getting better at this reviewing thing lol. -hugs- You're awesome girl!
(#) water_dragon 2006-12-02 10:24:55 PMlooks totally lost uhhh...
don't get scared! just because i don't know anything about yuy-gi-oh doesn't mean it wasn't good! cuz it was! very good!
Author's responseAh. Well, it's OOC a bit, but by all technicalities, whenever any character falls in love the act OOC lol. Anyways, glad you like it. If you don't understand it, just imagine it being original characters. Yami, Yugi, and Jou are male, and Mai is female, that's all you really have to know.