Revenge rocks, well it does until something goes wrong...
Revenge is a dish best served cold. Supposedly. It's really good. A bit like SOD's song Sick.
It's intriguing, though I thought the narrator sounded too rational to be narrating her own death this way. Just an impression.
Also, I think this could use a little editing as I managed to read some typos that jarred the mood you were going for.
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