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Revenge

by Alyss 2 Reviews

Revenge rocks, well it does until something goes wrong...

Category: Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2007/01/17 - Updated: 2007/01/17 - 170 words - Complete

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  • Revenge

    (#) Silvana 2007-01-18 09:07:47 AM

    Revenge is a dish best served cold. Supposedly. It's really good. A bit like SOD's song Sick.
  • Revenge

    (#) MarkPoa 2007-02-02 05:44:58 PM

    It's intriguing, though I thought the narrator sounded too rational to be narrating her own death this way. Just an impression.

    Also, I think this could use a little editing as I managed to read some typos that jarred the mood you were going for.

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