The Weasley males better not find out, but Harry has a little secret.
(#) thomaswatts 2007-04-15 10:02:11 PM
The twist at the ending is interesting, semi-original, but smutless. FicWad demands smut! If other authors can write Harry/Minerva, you can write Harry/Molly.
(#) plow 2007-04-15 10:04:03 PM
Is this going to become a story?
(#) slasheh 2007-04-16 10:35:48 AM
well nice twist.
Now a few things: one for a meaningfull story it has to be longer, add some filler, maybe add a flashback to the first meeting.
second: don't switch the PoV. it doesn't really help the story.
(#) Luna Lovegood 2007-04-16 04:21:47 PM
I am slightly scared.
MAJOR PLOT TWIST!!!!!!
(#) L_Rose 2007-04-16 06:39:12 PM
WOW...I have no other words...
If you can continue this, please do...
I watch 24, which is like the most complicated show in tv, and even I didn't see that coming...
(#) Ithilwen 2007-05-07 06:38:31 PM
Please don't be about their mom. Please don't be about their mom. Please don't be about --GYAAAAAHHH!! GROSS!! Mrs. Weasley is Mrs. Robinson!
I'd have to go with yes, it was pretty obvious.
I know your edits are blocked right now, but still, "somehow" is one word. So is "redhead." I thought for a second that there was a red head with no body in Harry's bed.