(#) fallloutofgrace 2008-04-20ok...be ready for my incredibly confusing...and contradicting review! evil laughter
but first...you...you made me cry!!! in the good way of course. that was so beautiful! ~cries~ i am in love with this so very much...
this was probably the most simplistic complicated story ever. and i mean that as a compliment. seriously. like...it was a relatively easy read...but there was so much stuff that made it so incredibly special...
i especially love how you started off every paragraph with "i remember when..." it fit...a lot of the time, if you start every paragraph off the same way, it tends to get dull...but this...it just fits...it makes the story that much more...i cant think of the word...grr...anyways, it sets the mood of the story. it also tells you that this is a story that is being told as a memory, not present times...i just love it greatly...
ha! what a great way to wake up...its too early to be awake on a weekend...XD
thank you so much for your wonderful writing!
(#) whitereflections12 2009-04-11This is the first fanfic in awhile that's actually made me cry.
You wrote this so perfectly. It was like watching Frank flip through a journal, picking out his most memorable days, both the memories he wants to keep and the ones he just can't lose, even if he tried. Beautiful.
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