(#) tragicWithACapital_T 2007-07-11heyy, i'm liking so far :)
you can put another character in there named Emily, she'd gladly date Frank ;)
i like the story but i keep getting confused about how you say stuff like:
"You looked at Gerard and blushed." (for example even though I don't think it's in the story.)
it's just easier to read something when YOU're not the character... like:
"I looked at Gerard and blushed."
"Carrie looked at Gerard and blushed."
idk, i just found it odd how you wrote "YOU"
otherwise great story! loving the plot. poor merch girl! haha
thinks to self- must become a merch girl
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