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Words I thought I'd never speak

by gypsydancer349 4 Reviews

An interiew can change everything

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/07/11 - Updated: 2007/07/12 - 1449 words

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  • A smile can change everything

    (#) tragicWithACapital_T 2007-07-11 10:43:15 PM

    heyy, i'm liking so far :)

    POOR FRANKIE!
    you can put another character in there named Emily, she'd gladly date Frank ;)

    i like the story but i keep getting confused about how you say stuff like:

    "You looked at Gerard and blushed." (for example even though I don't think it's in the story.)

    it's just easier to read something when YOU're not the character... like:

    "I looked at Gerard and blushed."
    or
    "Carrie looked at Gerard and blushed."

    idk, i just found it odd how you wrote "YOU"

    otherwise great story! loving the plot. poor merch girl! haha
    thinks to self- must become a merch girl
  • A smile can change everything

    (#) little_miss_screamo 2007-07-11 11:08:23 PM

    i heart you
    i truly do :D
  • A smile can change everything

    (#) xmiss_Bx 2007-07-12 06:38:29 AM

    Poor Frankie, but I like this alot...its a great story.

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