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The Perfect Dream

by Aura 2 Reviews

Aura dreams of the prefect day.

Category: Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Erotica,Romance - Characters: 0 - Warnings: [X] - Published: 2007/08/21 - Updated: 2007/08/26 - 1473 words - Complete

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  • The Perfect Dream

    (#) Ashwee 2009-01-15 11:44:03 AM

    Adorable short story.

    I think you actually did a very good job considering grammar and spelling error's. You sound like your a talented writer. The sense were described perfectly. And this line. . . "Not until you pay the fee.”. . . clever, very clever.

    I rate the story +1 for Ambiance.

    :)
  • The Perfect Dream

    (#) Ashwee 2009-01-15 12:21:59 PM

    I apologize, in the earlier post I meant to say 'scene' instead of 'sense'.

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