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The Perfect Dream
(#) Ashwee 2009-01-15
Adorable short story.
I think you actually did a very good job considering grammar and spelling error's. You sound like your a talented writer. The sense were described perfectly. And this line. . . "Not until you pay the fee.”. . . clever, very clever.
I rate the story +1 for Ambiance.
:)The Perfect Dream
(#) Ashwee 2009-01-15
I apologize, in the earlier post I meant to say 'scene' instead of 'sense'.
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