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Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
Harry escapes Britain, and learns the truth about the weirdest heritage ever. He learns stuff and gets some girls, too. There is much to experience in the land of the Midnight Sun. (There will be ...
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Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) iamleath 2008-01-31
I find myself enthralled with this story and am unable to wait for the next update. Congratulations.
I would like there to be more interaction between Harry and Ginny because they are such a perfect couple.
I look for a lot of fan fiction stories on the net and I am very glad that I found this site as it has a lot of interesting stories on it.Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) youngdosha31 2008-02-15
just wanted to say this is a great story. Im home laid out on medical and i was laying here hopeing for an update in the following days and figured id read it from the begining again and make a day of it. after reading ur story always waitin for an update over again it reminded me why i cant wait for your future updates.(SMUT)No really. U write some damn good smut man. also adding in a very enternaining story in between the smut, man if u created HP,it would have sold way more... Hope u update soon.
youngdosha31Author's response
Thanks. Re-reading is a great to do when you're laid up.
i aim to entertain, and judging by the number of people reading my story, it appears that people find it entertaining. Smut, coming up.
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(#) BORICUAGIZMO 2008-03-03
the story is fantastic, i want to learn about norse mythology. the problem though is the few chapters that are missing. or doubled over. on the other hand its a fantastic storyHarry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) poo 2008-03-18
I created this account solely to read your work. A great piece.
I'm not going to pretend its the best piece I've ever read - one particular piece I read (that has unfortunately not been updated in a long time) lives on a whole different plain to any other fanfiction I've found. However, your piece lies somewhere between some of the better pieces I've read and the above mentioned extraordinary piece.
Congratulations on a job well done, continue the work for us all - its a great story. Also enjoyed the great side story that you made about the hunting Huldr - VERY good smut, hope you write some more similar pieces. Lots more.Author's response
OK, now I'm officially blushing.
I set out to entertain myself, and now i have 2k readers a week. That's insane. There are so many stories out there that i believe to be better, but i tend to go with public opinion. :)
The dream is to get some non-smutty work out and get an invitation by Jeconais to FFA.
No, that won't happen, i know.
There's another fic in the making, and even a third that's on the rough sketch stage. I intend to keep writing for a LOOONG time.
Thanks.
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(#) Clerith 2008-03-26
Absolutely fantastic story, one of my favourites. The plot is highly original and smoking hot, and just a great pleasure to read. I wish for much more!Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) Jimm 2008-03-29
This story is a lot of fun. And I like the Norse mythology in it.
Thanks for sharing it with us.Author's response
Thanks.
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(#) lkngatlife 2008-04-02
Really impressive story. Enough sex to keep anyone interested, and a good "theme" that doesn't detract one bit from the erotic side of it. In fact, I find myself reading the story as much for the non-erotic themes as the erotic ones. Very few authors that write this kind of work can put the two together without one distracting from the other. I look forward to seeing what you do as we go on.Author's response
Thanks. The balancing isn't easy, but i believe i've got it down.:)
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(#) jakepoop 2008-04-02
yoou said english was your third language. what was your second? how often will you post a chapter? great story by the way.Author's response
My first is Swedish, my second is Norwegian, although i believe English is my second skillwise these days. I haven't spoken norwegian in ages. I post ... every now and then. Usually every second week, but Reality interferes sometimes.
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(#) toranosuke 2008-04-03
I read over half of this story and I tried to like it, I really did but I'm sorry because I'm going to have to leave a pretty negative review.
To be honest your writing style could use some work but that'll come with practice, and the porn is enjoyable as well.
The problem is the complete lack of an enemy. Harry is now super-powered, has everything he could ever want and appears able to crush any opposition. It's annoying how the bad guys only get a chance to accomplish something if they're lucky and not because they're on equal footing, this makes them pathetic and uninteresting (and as a result, the story). Draco stunning Harry and breaking his nose in HBP is interesting, Nott shooting Harry is a desperate attempt to inflict some damage is not.
What makes a great many fics enjoyable is that the hero has difficulties achieving his goals, the rest are either one-shots or comedies that don't necessarily need problems as they can get in the way of all the fun (depending on the story of course).
Your story is what many would call 'porn with a plot' but the plot, as interesting as it could be with all the elements you've added, fails as the story as it is is incapable of having a climax (not in the sexual sense) and therefore has no real goal or point.
Sounds terrible, I know but I really had to let that out.
Author's response
Hate to shock you, but the enemy will will. Harry doesn't stand a chance.
Voldemort? With some competent people in charge, CanonVoldie wouldn't have stood a chance. I had to search Reality to find a good enemy, and I did. I just won't spell it out.
Vanir
EDIT
Will WIN, should it have been. Oh, and there's no such thing as a negative review. I do need to know what the readers think, whether I act on it or not.
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(#) toranosuke 2008-04-03
Obviously I was only talking about the the 2/3 or so of your story, so it's about time the enemy gets something done.
I mayl try to continue reading this now that you said that, but if I do I'll reserve my right to criticize =PAuthor's response
Oh, just don't expect battles or things like that. The enemy is quite different. If you want the more standard approach of Hero Vs. Villain, there's 500.000 such stories out there, and there's no point in wasting your time with this one. After all, I'm not writing a book, I'm amusing myself. Everybody has the right to criticize. As long as there's a point to it, it's a good thing. If there's no point, I don't read it, or as i said in the very first chapter, I taunt it. You had a very good point. I need to make it more obvious, obviously.
Vanir
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