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Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
Harry escapes Britain, and learns the truth about the weirdest heritage ever. He learns stuff and gets some girls, too. There is much to experience in the land of the Midnight Sun. (There will be ...
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Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) kronos793 2007-12-23
Excellent Story. Addition of other girls is very well done. can't wait to see what's next.Author's response
The common concept of "Hi! You're pretty/have nice boobs. What's your name? Let's Bond." annoys me. I hope i'm doing better.
Thanks for reviewing.
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(#) firelord 2008-01-04
i love this story please keep the chapters coming for as long as you canHarry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) Nekoranmakun 2008-01-07
Good story, and I can't wait until the next chapter is up. One thing though, the liege, liege lord , whatever would be Harry, while Neville and everyone else of the same ilk would be vassals, not liegemen or liegeladies.
The vassal is in service of his/her liege/liege lord.Author's response
Thanks, and you're most likely right.
I've been told that the way i use it is more odd than wrong, though. Odd i can deal with, but vassal does sound better. I'll switch from here on. Ah well, another bloop to the list..
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(#) iamspammer 2008-01-12
I liked this chapter. I really liked the way Harry dealt with headmaster; smarty and powerfully.
Umbridge was surprise, but I think you have something very good (nastily good) planned for her.
Fudge; I think he should be removed. Then who should be minister. If you want to do something drastic, then Tonks (I did say drastic). Otherwise go with norm and choose Amelia (NOT Arthur).
So, in a subtle way without telling everything he explained his power and belief. Very good.
One thing stuck me odd.
- Why Harry din't know about attack on Tracey and Pansy while he knew about attack on Nevellie? Tracey has pendant too. I think it should be changed,Something like Runes in their necklaces
- How did Snape know about Pansy and Tracey?
He should rip Hermione one and make her change her beliefs.
Dumbledore should be subdued even more but not directly by fighting. Subtly, without risking ire of public.
Waiting for next chapter. You din't update this week. Please do.
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For some reason Ficwad din't get my first comment. If i tcomes there then please dis regard first one
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I read this chapter today because for some rason Ficwad is not counting your chapters correctly. I thin kyour story has "21" chapters not "20". That's why I missed it before.Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) warningyouhaveavirus 2008-01-15
hp and the midnight sune ftw! it wass awesome. loved the norse miythology mixed in the stiryHarry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) firelord 2008-01-19
i love this story the plot is fantastic and the sex scenes cant get much better keep up the fantastic writing and update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allowsAuthor's response
On it. It's always easy to write with reviews coming.:D
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(#) EluSurion 2008-01-20
ohohohoh... i like this story very much. In most story people write something, and write something to contradict what they said before... havent found anything like that yet, but that could be because of the 'weird' words(sorry, im dutch and can write english but it stops there...)
anyway... i hop u can keep up with the writing and ill kep the story in my "HP on update" list :D
EluSurionAuthor's response
Thanks.
I've written a bunch of contradictions so far, but the reviewers won't let me get away with them for too long.
More is coming up fairly soon.
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(#) Phil 2008-01-21
Great story. Keep the whoe plot going, even leaving an opening at the end for a sequel.
Just one thing. In the early chapters, Hedwig fell into a plot-hole (must be worse than a black hole), and now it has happened again, as she wasn't heard from after the wake for her companion. I feel that this will need redressing...Author's response
Thanks, and that's the plan.
The plot hole was that i didn't even mention her at the platform. Now, however, she's been at Kilchurn for a while, dating a nice Eagle Owl, catching drive-in movies and mice with him, and scouting out a nest in the Hamptons. Or possibly, i just forgot about her again. This time, though, i won't rescue the line again. There's just no point to it now as i have moved so far from OotP.
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(#) dragonfire 2008-01-25
This is definently the best story on FicWad in my opinion. I love how you didn't make the whole story just smut but you have an exciting plot and it just reads perfectly.Author's response
Thanks. This is the kind of story I'd like to read. Nice to see i wasn't alone in that.
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(#) Phil 2008-01-26
Great story. Brilliant use of mythological figures. Keep up the good work.
By the way, did you notice that your chapter numbers have gone awry from chapter 17?Author's response
Thanks, and yes, i noticed. I have nothing to do with that. It's the site that provides those numbers, and it's not my fault it can't count... or answer mails.
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