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• Lessons in Speech

  (#) JesusKetchum31 2006-01-04

  AWW! SO CUTE! I can't think of anything that could be improved.
  
  
  
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  Author\'s Response: Thanks. ^^;; The plotbunny kind of attacked my brain, so there it is. Glad you liked it.

• Lessons in Speech

  (#) Heathenesque 2006-01-04

  gigglesnort That makes so much sense!
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Doesn't it just? ^^

• Lessons in Speech

  (#) Ardwynna 2006-01-07

  Corruption of the young! Bad daddy! XD
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Isn't he just? ^^;; Maybe it's a good thing he left before he got to Alphonse...

• Lessons in Speech

  (#) Godaime 2006-01-16

  Amusing beyond all reason. It's sweet to see stories about the younger Elric brothers - and funny ones.
  
  However, the way you wrote Ed's speech was a bit disorienting, like 'sowwy' and such. That may be how it sounds, but it throws the reader for a moment. Now, adding apostrophes where sounds are left out, or changing the grammar to sound more childish, is fair game and can be easily understood.
  
  Thanks again!
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Thanks for the critique; I originally debated a bit about how I was going to do that. It's really difficult trying to write for someone who's about eighteen months old or so, and I wasn't sure how to go about representing it. Thanks for the suggestions; I'll see if I can get it to flow better.

• Lessons in Speech

  (#) Anat_Astarte 2006-03-21

  LOL!! Too cute!!!
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Yeah, that's what happens when baby!Ed gets in my head. Too bad Al wasn't old enough to really remember their father, huh?

• Lessons in Speech

  (#) Roaming_Fool 2006-08-07

  snicker It's true, too. Kids hear everything...
  
  I liked the glimpse we got of the Elric household before Hoeinheim left. It emphasizies how "normal," they were, even though Hoeinheim and his children were anything but normal.

• Lessons in Speech

  (#) Demonic_Angel_C 2006-09-22

  Amazing story, I think you should keep writing humorous stories, you've made my day.

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