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• Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.

  (#) xxACoalminexx 2007-11-01

  Aw...
  
  I loved this chapter, ever since the first sentence. You're an amazing writer, you know that? It doesn't matter if you changed the facts around, because your story makes up for it.
  
  Andy the Jesus look-alike. Deja vu!

  Author's response

  =DDD
  
  I've got to tell you, when I read this review, I had the biggest smile on my face. This week has been so stressful and I needed a review like this. It seriously means a lot to me.
  Tis' a total confidence booster. Thanks oh-so much. =DDDDD

• Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.

  (#) releasethepants 2007-11-01

  Beautiful chapter, I love the way you describe things, it's paints such a beautiful picture.
  
  Can't wait to see where you go with this, and don't worry about the song & timing, it's called creative license ;) hehe
  
  Baby Bottle Pops & Mounds of Ben&Jerry's for you

  Author's response

  Awe, thank you so, so, so, so, so, so much. This review means a lot. I needed to hear something nice since this week has just been a load of shit.
  
  =D
  Mmmm. Baby Bottle Pops and mounds of Ben&Jerry's are the best! I will share some with you ;D

• Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.

  (#) mooniexmisfit 2007-11-02

  Beautiful Chapter my dear; all the words flow so beautifully. I salute you. Awh, only a couple more chappies

  Author's response

  My, my. Thanks barrel loads, love. I was sort of unsure about this chapter, but thanks oh-so much.
  
  This week= Has been Fuckville.
  This review= Has made me feel so much better!

• Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.

  (#) aznfoblover 2007-11-02

  gahhhh aefklaj;we
  i just read like the entire story now. and it was kind of... absolutely WONDERFUL. i'm just kind of depressed that it's going to end soon. wonderful chapter. all i can really say.

  Author's response

  I'm certainly glad that you had a chance to read my story. Am also happy to see that you had a chance to review ;D
  
  Oh, don't be sad, love! Stories have to end sometime, y'know?
  
  Thanks bunches for the review, it means a lot to me. =D

• Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.

  (#) glindapsawyer 2007-11-03

  i really liked this chapter. it makes me want to listen to 'take this to your grave' and i could write an entire blog about how that makes me feel.
  the advice saffy's mom gave her made total sense. it was great. and i love that she showed up in her p.j.'s! calling the song 'where is your boy' works great. fiction is fiction, not everything has to be straight from fall out boy facts. :D
  i'm sorry you've been stressed & stuff has been shitty for you. reading that almost made me change my mind about reviewing, but i decided i needed to say it. sometimes paragraphs feel overwritten. with words like 'algid' and such. and more description then necessary. a thesaurus isn't needed for everyday kind of words. for me it makes the story flow less.
  but otherwise i love this fic.

  Author's response

  Well, I'm sorry to hear that you had second thoughts on reviewing. But, I'm glad that you liked this chapter.
  
  Thank you for the critique, but I'm not sure it's going to change the way I write. I love using descriptions and when a story is lacking that, I may not enjoy it as much. I like to actually picture the scene, and that's what I try to portray in my fiction. But, I might need to slim down on the usage of descriptions. =D
  
  I think the thesaurus is quite necessary. Every day kind of words can become boring and cliche, so to spice things up a bit, I put in more descriptions and vocabulary. So, I completely disagree with the feeling of paragraphs being over-written. I try to vary what I write, but I do admit that I can over-use some adjectives. I can't count how many times I put 'crimson-colored' in a chapter. =D
  But, descriptions make the story flow more, for me. But, I do agree that I may need to skim down on descriptions. Too much can become boring. ;d
  
  
  Thanks for the review. =D

• Baby, Seasons Change But People Don't.

  (#) mooniexmisfit 2007-11-15

  a response, to your response.
  fuckville sucks, because everyone is fucked. being fucked, fucking sucks. it's like, who gives a flying fuck about a fuck that flys, let alone a fucking town where might I add, everyone is fucked. fuckedville, should go fuck it-self up it's fucking gynormous ass. ther person(s) that made you go on a trip to fucking fuckville, should fucking die.
  
  did I just say fuck an astounding 23456789876543256789 fucking times?
  
  one truly fucked,
  caity =D

  Author's response

  Hahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.
  This review, totally made 100% of my day. It was absolutely hilarious. Thanks oh-so fucking much. ;D
  You're the best. =D

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