(#) Meteoricshipyards 2007-12-19Loved the Harry/Dumbledore confrontation.
Nice story overall (don't know if I've reviewed yet.)
I can't imagine this Harry becoming CAPSLOCK!Harry. First, because he has no connection with Voldie anymore (if I read that right), and second, he won't be tortured (more than once) by Umbridge.
Thanks for the story.
(#) stealacandy 2007-12-19Moses, or meses, means child, or son, even kid. So Ramses would mean son of Ra, and Tutmoses would mean son of Tut.
Why would Tutmoses (which ever one of them, there were several, IIRC) would be on the same level as Osiris, the god himself?
And why, in the name of God, or Ra, or Tut, or whomever, would he want to be known as brother Mo?
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-12-19The ending argument could have been much more fun if you would have allowed it to be. One, I like your stories because they are though provoking. I really like ironic and funny stories, too. Nonjon or Cloneserpent would be classic examples of authors that do well in that category. I would think that, if you applied yourself, that you, too, could do well in that category. You rarely embrace the opportunity to take that biting argument and switch it over to wit. I wish that you would. You may find that you writing improves with allowing it. It was almost funny, in the end, almost, but the serious undertone ruined the humor for me. I look forward to your next update.
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