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Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves
This is the tale of Harry Potter. He lives at Number 4 Privet Drive, Little Whinging in Surrey, England with his Mother' Sister, His Aunt Petunia Evans-nee Dursley. Her Husband Vernon Dursley and c...
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Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves
(#) Dragen 2008-01-10
Not a bad start to the story, I like that Harry made his aunt into his own sex slave, mahaha, though you could have a beta writer to look over it to make it beter.
You could have placed more paragraphs into the story, the main time you could do this is when people are talking.
As the saying goes - Payback is a bitch. I like what he did to the bitch.
Why did you do this story in the 2007. I do hope that Harry will be like a true master, and not one in which the lidies are in control, or he makes them as equles, as there are TOO many of them out there. I hope there will be many sex sceens.
Update soon.Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves
(#) iamspammer 2008-01-10
And, I hope you get onto the slaving thing soon.
It would be nice that somehow Harry gets all Magic and then makes his slaves easily. How? If he can make slaves then why not get magic?
Just food for thought.Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves
(#) Cateagle 2008-01-10
Hmm, definitely an interesting start with Harry making his aunt into a sex slave; it should be interesting to see just how he uses and disciplines her as his slave. I thought the body jewelry was a nice touch, esp. if it was spelled to be seem/felt by no one else.
She's had her opportunities to deal fairly with him and hasn't, now she'll have to pay a price, and I wonder how long it'll take her to really enjoy that price.
It should be interesting to see the next few chapters.Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves
(#) Kyle_Dodge1 2008-01-12
Wow. This is the worst attempt at a sex scene that I've ever come across. Are you a fucking retard? What grade are you in? I've seen seventh graders write better.Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves
(#) sropike 2008-01-13
Interesting beginning. How many slaves are you planning?
Don't forget to add Ginny (shouldn't be too much of an effort, as she is so starstruck) and Hermione (everyone loves a challenge, not?) at least.
Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves
(#) mathmans 2008-06-29
This is really good start I hope you keep going.Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves
(#) Kenmei 2009-03-18
Love the beginning though I gagged a bit at Petunia. She's so old and a blood family member. How old is Harry in this fic?Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves
(#) LDA 2009-03-30
Are you going to update any time soon or have you quit writing the story?Author's response
im trying but dont hold your breath
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