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• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-01-27

  Pretty interesting update. The dialogs were a bit abrupt for my taste, but I still liked every bit of it.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Cateagle 2008-01-27

  Quite the intense chapter, but it gives a lot of needed background. 'Twould seem that the first Dumbles' refusal to consider aught but his own ideas and concepts straightjacketed him into a losing postion and Britain, and likely much of the world, lost because of his tunnel vision. At least Nicolas Flamel won't be as fixiated and we can hope that -this- Dumbles won't be in a position to cause trouble. Now, the earlier returned Tommy-boy will be a bit more of a headache, though I rather suspect that he's going to find Barone/Potter to be even more of one. The relationship 'tween Harry, Hermione, and Blaise should get quite interesting as they mature; if they ever all get interested in each other, a multiple marriage like that could definitely go a long way toward ending the bad blood 'tween the two families.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Coolone007 2008-01-28

  You are doing a great job on this story!

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Vanir 2008-01-29

  Yeah. What they said.
  
  I find that the always-perceptive Cateagle above has mentioned all my points. All that's left for me is
  kowtow
  
  Vanir

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) banner 2008-01-31

  Thanks for the explication - it's much better done this way, instead of having Harry rant-rant-rant about the unfairness of his life...

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) sparky40sw 2008-02-08

  top notch chapter - loved the way you used the pensieve and narration to fill in the necessary background without weighing down the story.
  
  So has harry been using his organization to eliminate the horcruxes?? ( I do not remember if this was mentioned in earlier chapters)
  
  hopefully this will not damage the "Harmony" too badly - but if it does, well you do have Luna and Blaise in the bullpen.
  
  thanks for continuing this - it is getting more interesting and gripping - the idiotic mob boss stuff made suspension of disbelief rather difficult.
  
  warm regards
  Ken

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) biged78 2008-04-14

  This was a very good chapter.

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