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!Twelve!

by Disenchanted 10 Reviews

SS #12: Frankie fell in love.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2008/02/14 - Updated: 2008/02/15 - 1611 words

Reviews

  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) Jamie-core 2008-02-14 10:45:29 PM

    Aww.

    Gee Got What He Wanted.
    Frank.

    God, I Wonder what Wilona Will Do.
    I Wonder If She'll Turn Into A Giant Hulk Like Creature, And Break All of Her Anti Aging Creams?
    LOL, Ive ahd Way to much SUgar and FanFiction.
    OVERDOSE.

    :)
    Update Sometime Soon?
    Even know You just Updated Now.

    :P

    Jamie
    x

    Author's response

    Anti-aging cream...hahaha that cracks me up. I forgot to mention how old they all were...oops.
  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) EvolHexx 2008-02-15 02:23:05 AM

    GWDUOWEUFS!!
    OMFFFFGGG

    AMAZZZIINNNGG
    YAY
    GERARD!
    FRANK!
    AHH!!!!
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASEE!!
    OOOHH GOD, I CANT WAIT TO LONG
    PLEAASSSSEEE
    !!
    lols
    xox

    Author's response

    Thanks. I totally adore your reviews!
  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) x_iero_addiction_x 2008-02-15 02:53:45 AM

    oh my god.
    Guess what?
    I fucking love you.

    Seriously,
    You are amazing
    This is amazing!

    This chapter has made me so happy XD
    I think im going to explode.

    Author's response

    Aw, thanks. I love you too. Happy late Valentine's Day
  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) TheSharpestLives 2008-02-15 03:09:29 AM

    WooohooO!
    Great! I can't wait to hear Wilona's reaction!
    She'll be like - Megabitchsqueal
    And gee will be like - lmaostupidcow

    Author's response

    Oh. My. Franking. Gerard. That is simply hilarious. Fuck, I can't stop laughing. STUPID COW?! Amazing. I love you.
  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) AshamedToRiseAndBe 2008-02-15 03:18:33 AM

    Lol the coment above was random...?

    I fucking love this story!!!
    Its sooooo amazing!

    More!!!

    AJ Xx

    Author's response

    I'm glad you do.
  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) cutegirl12356 2008-02-15 08:28:49 AM

    I fucking love it...please write more!
  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) sleepyfaerie 2008-02-15 09:21:26 AM

    EEE!!!!
    YAY!!!
    ahem..
    that was awesome!!!
    FRERARDNESS!
    :glomp:
    ahem...
    ooh..
    what will he say to Wilona?
    can't wait for more!

    Author's response

    =] your reviews make me oh so happy.
  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) xXHeavenHelpUsXx 2008-02-15 07:35:54 PM

    yayayayay!!!!
    i lopved the update!!!
    and i don't know why but for some reason i loved it when you said "coughed out his tongue"
    i have no clue why but it was kinda hot...
    and i loved how gee was stutterind and being all swwet and stuff
    DUMPO WILONA THAT BITCH!!!
    updates!!!
    -Lindsey Lachrymosa

    Author's response

    Yeah...I guess that was pretty hot...thanks!
  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) crystalcrash 2008-02-20 12:03:10 PM

    Awww i loved the part when Gee says "Love ME" and Frank attacks him hahhaa. That is too cute ;)
    I'll be looking forward for the next chapter... hopefully Frankie will toughen up and tell that fucking WHOREBITCHSLUT what she deserves.
    And then Gee and Frankie will live happily ever after and so will I.
    -sigh-
    hahaha
    < 33333333

    Author's response

    Thanks =D Working on the rest...
  • While Love's On The Line

    (#) ShotGunSinner 2010-09-06 12:57:40 AM

    Laughed so hard at the comment about anti aging cream! That was amazing!

    I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

    The cat finally got his cream ^^

    off to read more,
    your a very very talented writer

    xo
    theo

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