FIXED! Thanks for letting me know it was cut off! No idea what happened. This chapter is really dark and sad... until the end ;)
(#) asherschick 2008-02-20 11:22:06 AM"How could a person be made as if he were made of dough? 20 minutes in the oven on 220"
I'm sure there's more but the chapter seems to end after this line! But I want to read!!! I have to read!!! Why won't it show up? Is there something wrong with me or is it just Fic-Wad being evil again?
Author's responseThanks for letting me know, you are very right, a lot was cut off. I fixed it now though, sorry for the wait!
Enjoy < 3333333
(#) RyanRossLuver 2008-02-20 12:39:33 PMasherschick is right, after that line the rest of the chapter cuts off! Can you please try to fix it?
But what i've read so far in amazing as always...poor Frankie
Author's responseFicwad was being evil but i taught it a lesson ;) Hopefully the whole chapter is up now, hope you like it!
(#) ilovemikey 2008-02-21 02:59:21 AMWow. Short, but amazingly powerful. The contrast to the last chapter is so strong, I'm left a little stunned.
Author's responseIt's fixed now, even though it was hard to get it right... Ficwad kept putting up the same part over and over again and not the whole thing! -__-
I won the battle though muahaha xD
(#) asherschick 2008-02-26 12:04:05 PMhaha! I knew there was something amazing in the lost part of the chapter, I knew it! xD I'm so glad that you've fixed this cause this chapter is beautiful - I think Fic-Wad wanted to sabotage it just for that mere reason!
A first kiss! First kisses are always wonderful, Frerard-first-kisses (hmm everything about Frerard when you're the writer, actually) simply ROCK! But someone saying "I'm sorry" after kissing you wouldn't be very nice, I guess. I think Frankie might get mad or worse uneasy with Gee or something, I don't know...
And Gee managing to make it all go away... That was really sweet and bitter at the same time. Because usually, when we say things like that, we can never do enough to make the other person feel better. But Gee sorta did that, but he left poor Frankie with question marks hanging all over his head, that's mean!! But still, him running out of the room is the more logical (and realistic) scenario, I guess.
I'll be waiting for the rest of the good stuff, r&r buddy! Keep it up :D
Author's responseYes, Ficwad is trying to kill one of my fav chapters!! I posted the end of it in a separate chapter, its not much, but its the actual end of the chapter.
Saying I'm sorry isn't nice, nope, but he's confused, poor guy! ;) I'll talk more about that in future chapters... I'll have you all going "Awww poor Gee!!"
Next chapter will be up soon hopefully, unless Ficwad makes another evil plan to destroy it :p
(#) RyanRossLuver 2008-02-26 12:40:05 PMYay. I knew something amazingly cute and sexy and Frerardy was in this chapter!
It was so cute, hoe Gee managed to make the pain go away, but he was a bit mean for leaving like that...
oh well, update again soon?
Author's responseHe's confused, i'll talk more about that in future chapters ;)
I'll update ASAP! thanks for the review
(#) Allymarie1121 2008-02-26 02:29:18 PMI adore this... best chapter yet! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!
Author's responseThanks, i like this chapter too ;) Now go read the end of it!! hahaha
I had to post it in a separate chapter because Ficwad kept cutting it off
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-02-26 04:40:46 PMThat...was...adorable!
I loved this chapter, it was like...amazing.
I feel so weird about Frank in this story though. Him being created and all.
It kinda makes me...I dunno...feel weird about the real Frank Iero. I mean, it's obviously not true but like...I really don't know what I'm trying to say.I'm just confusing myself, and probably you too.
Ignore all the rambling I seem to be doing today and just read my last line.
Amazing story, I love it so much. I can't wait for an update.
Author's responseThanks!! xD
Hahaha just remember this story is in the Fantasy section! It would be cool if it was real though... well, not so much for him!! (not now anyways) ;)
(#) ficfriction 2008-02-26 06:16:40 PMI don't know if it's still cutting off or not, but it cuts off right after Gee runs out of the room and frank is thinking about his lips. Cuts off at "his lips were".
Other than that I loved the story so far! ^^ I just read it straight through hehe. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's responseYes it was cut off, thanks for realizing that. I have the missing part up now in a different chapter because Ficwad won't let me post it all together for some reason. It's not much, but its the end and important.