Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Like A Shadow He Stayed Close, Watching My Every Move
(#) oxycontin_genocide 2008-03-15I loved it!!!!
Poor Frank though :(
The beginning is awesome, it really is.
Nice dedication :D
Can't wait for more
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-03-16Oh wow, oh my fucking God. I swear, this is THE most original idea anyone could've come up with for a Frerard!
I love it like...so much. This is definately going on my alerts. Great job.
But just one technical thing, I noted that sometimes you said "He's" instead of "his." You might wanna go back and fix one of those, because it obviously changes the meaning from being the possesive verison of "he" to "he is."
Other than that, fuckin' amazing.
Author's responseAww, Thanks!
your review means so much to me.
Thanks for pointing that out,
Yeah I always accidently write he's instead of his,
Ill fix it up though.
- i havent read a fic in like FOREVER..
this is verryy creative
and kinda confusing =D
but really good!
so, idk if this is a spoiler or not but..
does gerard like become real
and everyone can see him? =]
..next chapter please =D
Author's responseUhh, sorry its so confusing.
But thanks anyways!
Well not exactly,
But the story may change as It goes.
So not even im sure.
(#) lilrainforest 2008-03-31ahh this is so cutee !!!
it's a little bit confusing but I'm staring to get it now.
It's so original and I love it.
I love how in Frank's eyes, Gee is real. And the whole Mikey thing is so like... wow. (:
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