From a sobbing son, to his mother. [[One-shot]] Take a look...
(#) AshamedToRiseAndBe 2008-03-29 10:29:29 PMWeird. Different and AWESOME!
I loved it!
But the last bit. Your stepdad doesn't hit you does he?
I hope not.
But that was fantastic!
Keep it up! =P
Author's responseThank you!!!
Uh, no, he doesn't hit me...that was just something replacing something else. Nothing serious =D
(#) RippedIntoPieces 2008-03-30 05:13:16 AMhey
this was awesome
no offence but did you base it slightly on the book "you don't know me"
its written at the beginning the same way
Author's responseYeah, the beginning.
Guess I should add that, huh?
Thank you for reading.
(#) ThreeCheersForMCR_x 2008-03-31 07:09:33 AMWow, that was really good and actually really sad...as it happens to many people and happened to my friend when she was younger but by her actual father..
Really, really good as usual :]
It's really upsetting to hear about things like this, it makes me extremely depressed.
I don't get attacked, but as I have made clear, I don't like my stepdad. He's a creepy sorta guy.
Anyway, thank you for the review.
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-01-27 06:15:05 PM....I have to say that this is probably one of my favorites ^_^
I feel so bad for the kids that actually go through that sort of crap, though. when i see someone who has bruises i dont care what happened i just wanna hold em and listen to them speak, ya know?
Author's responseYeah, I know. Thank you for reading.
(#) Emo_musik_chick 2009-02-16 11:08:07 AMI'm sorry that you don't have a good relationship with your stepfather. My parents are just starting to get into their first relationships since the divorce, so I know how hard and painful it can be. I hate everyone my parents date. Even if I haven't met them.
But anyway, I cried when I read that. It was remarkably beautiful, and it really spoke to me. I absolutely adore it and I think you should write more stuff like this- deep emotional stuff. Because that was truly amazing.
Author's responseThank you so much, that means a lot. You know, yeah, it's really difficult to see your parents with someone new. My relationship with my stepdad is thankfully getting better, although still it's just hard to accept and every little thing that he does wrong seems like a huge crime. And now that my dad is getting married, I'm just completely put off. But those are just tales from another broken home, I guess.
Anyway, thank you again for reading. And I like to think that even when I'm writing Frerard or something like that, a deep emotional message lies beneath. =P