One shot. Gerard loves Frank, but by the time he tells him it may be too late.
(#) crystalcrash 2008-06-13 01:32:04 PMThe story and idea are great. In my opinion though, everything happened too fast. Frank is drunk, Gerard suddenly tells him for some reason he loves Frank (why did he choose that moment after all those years?), Frank "thinks" he loves Gerard, and when Gerard is dying he says he loves him deeply. It's kinda strange, don't you think?
I really like the idea though, and the last sentence was sweet =)
Author's responseYeah I know it all happened quickly. I had a dream about it and I was like OMG I have to write this down.
Thanks for the response.