ok... story line is great... but i cant keep laughing at the part where she just says everything to gerard and the dudes... its like... i cant explain it.. i mean she only met the dudes and she goes on calling them and telling her about her personal life.... i mean she could say bout dat on the plane ride or something... nyways....... dont get the negatives badly k...... but u'r story is addictive i really like it...