Huzzah! I adore hundred-words.
Hm... This doesn't quite manage to come full-circle into a complete idea. There's atmosphere, but I can't even tell whom she's with. Yes, the summary says it's Draco, but it shouldn't have to stand on that alone. This has some good lines, though. I had to read "the design of her palm" a few times before I got it. That's the fun part, I think.