Review for Demons Within Me

Demons Within Me

(#) Pheonee 2006-06-24

I dunno if you've ever tried to remove a hoodie with a torn arm and a dislocated shoulder. The drying blood glues the material to your skin, and taking it off would hurt like, something really painful, and you try taking a sleeve off without moving your shoulder. All the same I loved it--don't stop!!

Author's response

Oh, sorry, I am getting a little scatterbrained in ym old age (notreally)but he DID take the hoodie off in the rain, meaning that the blood wouldn't have dried... and as for the shoulder... shoot. he does have a dislocated shoulder, doesn't he? slams head on keyboard Sorry, I'll get back to that in the next chapter... so... he's, uh, been in pain all this time, just... just pretends he isn't shiftyeyes

~Demenior