nice to see flitwick in the action. harry could learn alot from him. especially dueling style and tricks, even if flitwick in not willing to use some of the darker arts...
at bit cliche with killin of the damsel's parents... but i look forward to where you take it...
nice flashback... the wands were explained nicely. and i never really liked how more cores meant stronger wizard, kinda stupid... so i liked ur idea.
update soon, this and all ur other stories as well, congrats.