I just read the last few chapters now! Absolutely amazing!!! I don't get why she made up with William...although you wouldn't have made that happen with for no reason, would you? Unless it's like one of those things where you think it's really significant to the story line, but really it's there just to distract us!!!! (I'm sure there's a name for that! Red Herring, or something!?!?)
Anyway, this rocks! Can't wait to read more!!!
Author's response
well i kinda needed them to make up for the stuff about linda but i don't... this story just pulls me in different directions so i'm not sure yet where it's going, i just have the ending planned out and a few major turning points