Wow. Im kinda torn on this. I read the reivews and the story and unless I missed a chap or two there has been no sex (yet atleast). I totally get that its a made up story and all. I do agree the age thing is disturbing. But I would like to point out there is another story on here someone wrote Im not sure who about a girl who sleeps with her science teacher (Gerard) and there are noooo negative comments on that one. And I beleive the ages are the same... I'll have to go back and check. But anyway I do think the whole story line is extremely far-fetched. Yeah the grammer is bad a times and theres quite a few typos. Ive seen worse though. If you are going to keep posting you really need to- like the previous poster said - be able to take the critisim. Espc. when you put a controversial story line like this. ----xoxo
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I think I read that story