Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-06-23

LoL! I really was scared she killed Frankie! I mean he didnt move for a long time. =) I love youre writing style. Espc. in this chap. Sky describes everything so plainly. "I loaded this in the trunk and that in the trunk and Frankie in the trunk" And it comes off like no big deal! Sometimes I read it and its like..wait..what?!!? Frankie in the trunk?! LOL! So I was really getting worried that Frank was dead! Im glad hes not. I like how youre weaving alot of things in to with out straining so much. Like the tattoo and how they played drunk at first.

Next chap is coming up soon right? right? left? =P ----xoxo

Author's response

glad you liked it! and i would never kill sunshine! lol!