Review for Brother Z

Brother Z

(#) BJH 2007-06-24

Can you stand one more comment from the likes of me?

I think this is a simple typo, but then again it could be a subtle hint of some hidden dynamic. After Harry has his first night with both Luna and Hermione, and after Fawkes adopts Luna, AND after Harry has a second night with Hermione, you have him telling the girls about his daughters. He says, "as I told you I am technically a virgin."

Did you mean 'was a virgin' or is Harry still avoiding playing hide the sausage with these two lovely ladies?

BJH

Author's response

A simple typo. Hermione and Luna were very very happy, and Harry very very tired.

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