Review for Maybe I shouldn't

Maybe I shouldn't

(#) Alyss 2007-06-25

hold your breath, nobody move!!!!!!!!!
kat, d u think she saw the car? ;)
why couldnt it have been jenny, just to add an extra twist, XD
mind you this could easily get complicated and go on forever and ever
a bit like bob and the tourbus...
THATS IT!!!!!!!! bobs gf is the mechanic!!!!!!!!! oh, why didnt we see that before??

heehee

yeh, i really like this compared with some fics.
can baby cause some problems?? and just be an awkward cuss??
XD
i do realise ur gna ignore that

Author's response

holds breath
...
breaths Cause I'm forgetting my twists!!!!! No, his gf is...a ballerina...er, no.
I'm glad u like and I'm glad u realise I'm going to ignore that. =P