nice. some funny parts. since I can't rate twice I'll just put this. "You have to forgive yourself and not let the past interfere with the present." I thought that was very thought provoking. deep, good advice to live by.
again minor spelling/grammer issues. o and in the last chapter it said that he uses matches to light his cigarettes and in this one he uses a lighter... which makes more sence. may want to change that so it's not contradictory. good story