Okay so I just found this sory and instead of reviewing every chapter because trust me, that would be difficult, I am just going to make this review a killer. I love your story, the plotline is original and I like the way you captured their emotions. You gave each person characteristics and instead of leaving it there, I feel like you actually brought the characters to life. And for that I give you props, because I know how difficult it can be. You hit the nail on the head though. I think you've struck gold with this story, quite frankly, and I personally cannot wait until sunday-ish when you update again because I started reading this and did not get off my laptop for anything until I was finished. I think it is officially my fave story and I love it so much. All the characters seem how everyone imagines they would act, and yet you are one of the few people on Ficwad that I believe actually has the talent to capture that. You really put emotion into what you write and for that I am grateful because I love this. I will be a loyal reader and reviewer from now on, trust me. I love this so much. You are great and I can;t wait for the next update (did I say that already?)(oh, well).
Much love and props to a fellow author,
Rae