FINALYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!
All right! Now! I would like to say I loved this chapter! As usual! And my finger is glued to the ! button! Ok, now it's unglued. So, um, yes, whre was I? Oh yeah, I love your story. I just can't find something wrong with it, much as I try. Burrows into story to look for mishaps
By the way, although you have a rottem fruits firewall up...I SHALL CHUCK DEAD COCKROACHES PAINTED BRIGHT PURPLE WITH ORANGE SPOTS INSTEAD!!! (I have an obssession with those) Also cause my Auntie's Doberman--Yes she's still around, she's only eight yet!--can get through any firewall...let's just say, for your sanity and mine, update soon.
Author's response
Really! Nothing wrong with it! And oh no the firewalls one weakness! But I shall not worry I'll fix it next time... hehehe. Anyway I should write the next chapter tommorow.